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Conduct a Literature Review?Hi, can you please review and proofread for punctuation, some of the sentences are too long with no comas, nothing. It makes it confusingAs I told you, I have already submitted this assignment (conduct a literature review) that I fail. This instructor is very demanding, I am sending you the feedback he gave me for the assignmentThis is the feedback from the instructor:                                      Regarding a well-constructed review, be sure that your literature reviews flows logically; it should not read as a list of article summaries (author A studied this, author B studied this…). This should be a synthesized document – use the suggestions provided in the Notar and Cole article.  That said, there are several shortcomings to this review, many of which revolve around mechanical writing issues as well as APA issues. You will note sample mechanical writing errors as well as APA errors noted on your paper and in margin comments. While content is certainly more

important than writing mechanics, as one with an advanced degree you can be expected to be called upon to write reports, grant proposals, presentations at professional meetings, and so forth. I am not clear as to why you included annotations in your paper. This is not appropriate in a review of literature section. Please pay careful attention to the proper use of et al. Each source cited in the text must be included in the references (and vice versa). References must be listed in alphabetical order. Additionally, there is not a summary/conclusion, so the reader is left hanging.Grade and rationale: 70%Assignment completion—partially addressed the six bulleted items; conclusion needed.Understanding shown—poor understanding demonstrated Expression—mostly fair; conclusion neededAPA/grammar—APA is poorPlease reviewwork on all long sentences as instructed. review to make sure all points highlighted in the previous feedback are met.Answer Preview……………. APA    2022       words
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